Feribal and Alfan

Both characters are well drawn and the amount of detail is amazing, especially for a picture with minimal shading. The use of varying line hardness creates a good and simplistic look, while still giving them a realistic appearance. Shading could be implemented in areas to give the characters more depth, and different shading types could be used to 'texture' the look of the design. The hair could use some mid-tones to create a softer look, and a more rounded shape that hair would be, instead of a hard contrast from highlights to dark shade. But other than that, Great work!